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Aug 11, 2022 - 8:56:09 AM
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92 posts since 3/13/2011

Hello everyone.
I would like to know your opinion, about the first song that I am trying to compose.
I am open to all suggestions.
Sorry, for the language.
I use translator, sorry.
Thank you!

Andoni


Aug 11, 2022 - 9:36:59 AM
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janolov

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41845 posts since 3/7/2006

You asked for comments, so here is mine:

  1. It is usually difficult to to get an opinion just from a tab. Since you seem to have used TablEdit you can make a midi file so every one can listen to.
  2. The first part reminds a lot of Down The Road.
  3. There seems to be no real ending. Your end notes calls for more. Since the piece seems to be in the key of G, the last note should be a G 
  4. Don't bother about the language.  A lot of Americans also have difficulties to write in English..
  5. Independent of what response you get, you should continue with your own compositions. You are aa greater musician if you play your own stuff, than if you just imitate other players.

Edited by - janolov on 08/11/2022 09:39:52

Aug 11, 2022 - 9:54:54 AM

92 posts since 3/13/2011

Thank you Janolov for your quick response
Yes, the first part has a lot of Down the Road
And the tab was prepared for me by a friend.
And it also needs an ending.
Thanks again for your advice.
Cheers
Andoni

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